When I applied to law school, I was nothing extraordinary on paper. But my essays made me sound clear, compelling, and memorable.

On this page, you’ll see an example of my own personal statement, marked up with the same kinds of edits and feedback I give my students. It’s a real look at how good essays are built: not by inventing a new personality, but by sharpening what’s already there and telling your story with precision and confidence.

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